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[Gift:Xifox] Water Vixen

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The final Upload before I may of may not take my leave.
This is a gift for Xifox, because she's nearly the only person left i can trust and count on aslo became a great inspiration, thank you.

over and out (or not maybe)

Art © I don't care anymore
Character © *Xifox
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I'm not very good at critiquing but I may as well try! Lets Start off with the good stuff! ^w^

Good Stuff:
I absolutely love the pose, a it shows great confidence in the character. The expression is sweet yet flirty, and I really think it adds a summer feel to the picture. I like your shading style! Its very smooth and I say its a good technique! I like the shiny hair, and the light direction is good. The clouds look good too.

Stuff you need to work on:

I think the water that is in the background needs some work, like reflections and so on. Also the splashing water looks a little artificial in a way, because I think it is lacking foam. The sky is good but I think it should start off lighter at the bottom f the sky and be a gradient fill. On the shading, try and use a softer color such as brown, so it doesn't look so harsh. Maybe use a orange-y or pink-y texture on top to give the picture a warmer feel.

Good luck with your art!
^u^