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Pretty Please by CocoFoxStudios Pretty Please by CocoFoxStudios
Just a pic i decided to draw in my free time, (I should stop and bet back to studying though).
I redesigned my character Diérèse since she was the least favorite of my chars, see if people like her more now.

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:iconevilmadmuffin:
First: I'm not that proffessional for responsible critique.

Think you got some trouble with the leg, it looks a bit flat and in my opinion there are some shadows missing. The graphicstyle changes also, the upper legs are very shiny and look very rounded, the lower leg, as mentioned, a bit flat and the toes got an own graphicstyle too.

My suggestion would be, to change the "under - lower leg"s (do not know right word for the thrid part of the leg^^) angle a little bit more anticlockwise so it bends a bit more.

Some Notes, what i'm thinking about: The tail looks like it's startingpoint isn't right in the middle, moved a bit to her left side. And the Tail might be cause a shadow on the leg, also the whole upper leg will set her underleg in shadow.

By side, the background isn't really mine, but think it should only fill the gap.

That might be all, that i can even imagine that would be worth a discussion.
What do you think?
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SilverOrGold12 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
take the top off
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:iconsilverorgold12:
SilverOrGold12 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
Lets play
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:iconnick456799:
Nick456799 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I like the art
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:iconstudio-kyru:
Studio-Kyru Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love it!
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:iconfixman88:
fixman88 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
So pretty! *hugs her*
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks c:
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:iconk4nk4n:
K4nK4n Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Aww, so cute.
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:iconmat-kearney-fan:
Mat-Kearney-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
She is cute.
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconmat-kearney-fan:
Mat-Kearney-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
Cute.
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:iconlinkismine:
LinkIsMine Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think her head looks too big for her body, but other then that, I think it is a beautiful piece. -^v^- Keep it up!
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's just my style c: thank you
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:iconlinkismine:
LinkIsMine Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well you color beautifully. Don't ever stop using that talent. I wish I could color half as well as you can. ;p
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh thank you kindly, that's so nice :aww:
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:iconlinkismine:
LinkIsMine Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're most welcome. -^v^- and thank you, I do try to be. ;D lulz
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Wolowitz349 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
I love her! I love the way her hair curves between her eyes, I love the fur pattern on her face, and I really love the size of her hands! (I find small hands on girls adorable <3) I want her to be real!
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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:iconwolowitz349:
Wolowitz349 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
You're welcome. You do lovely work!
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:iconmartinekxx:
martinekxx Featured By Owner May 30, 2012
evrythink you want :iconofcourseyoucanplz:
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha c:
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:iconfartytreefrog:
FARTYTREEFROG Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
IMPOSSIBLY CUTE.---like the colouring.
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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:iconbubblesishot46853:
bubblesishot46853 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
I liked her before, and SHE'S EVEN CUTER NOW!!!
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i'm glad c:
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:iconbubblesishot46853:
bubblesishot46853 Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
You're welcome!
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:iconrobshi:
Robshi Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
She looks adorable! Nice work!
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why thank you :aww:
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:icontylar-i:
Tylar-I Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
hehe looks a but like falvie's style, did you use one of her pictures as a reference for her face?
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
not at all, no reference was used for this one c: , though I and inspired by falvie
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:iconluna777:
luna777 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she looks so cute
i love the pose and her hairstyle
the coloring looks lovely too
great work
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thanks :aww:
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:iconfelousefarnayne:
felousefarnayne Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww she looks so cute and pretty how you drew her posed like that and really like her design too along with the colours nice work and keep it up n_n
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so much :aww:
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:iconkenny25jkl13:
kenny25jkl13 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Que linda zorrita n///nP
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gracias c:
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:iconobsticle:
Obsticle Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Very cute.
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thx
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:iconwolfin22:
wolfin22 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
awww *hugs u*
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:iconkenshikun121:
KenshiKun121 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist
She is so cute and really adorable great work love it
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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:iconkenshikun121:
KenshiKun121 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist
not a problem
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:iconnega-xero:
Nega-Xero Featured By Owner May 25, 2012   Artist
The shading on this makes it look like it's in 3D! :iconaaahhplz:

It looks amazing :clap:
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww thanks :D
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:iconnega-xero:
Nega-Xero Featured By Owner May 25, 2012   Artist
You're welcome ^^
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:iconsdkfz171:
sdkfz171 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
wow very attractive and playful.
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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:iconkristopheb96:
KristopheB96 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
She looks fantastic! I liked Diérèse from the beginning too.
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Eh..i found her a bit dull :P
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:iconkristopheb96:
KristopheB96 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I guess it's up for you to decide since you're the artist of the character. ^_^''
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:iconhele-jaguar:
Hele-Jaguar Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow, very nice!
She's lovely! :)
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