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Pretty Please by CocoFoxStudios Pretty Please by CocoFoxStudios
Just a pic i decided to draw in my free time, (I should stop and bet back to studying though).
I redesigned my character Diérèse since she was the least favorite of my chars, see if people like her more now.

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:iconevilmadmuffin:
First: I'm not that proffessional for responsible critique.

Think you got some trouble with the leg, it looks a bit flat and in my opinion there are some shadows missing. The graphicstyle changes also, the upper legs are very shiny and look very rounded, the lower leg, as mentioned, a bit flat and the toes got an own graphicstyle too.

My suggestion would be, to change the "under - lower leg"s (do not know right word for the thrid part of the leg^^) angle a little bit more anticlockwise so it bends a bit more.

Some Notes, what i'm thinking about: The tail looks like it's startingpoint isn't right in the middle, moved a bit to her left side. And the Tail might be cause a shadow on the leg, also the whole upper leg will set her underleg in shadow.

By side, the background isn't really mine, but think it should only fill the gap.

That might be all, that i can even imagine that would be worth a discussion.
What do you think?
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Nick456799 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artist
I like the art
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:iconstudio-kyru:
Studio-Kyru Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love it!
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:iconfixman88:
fixman88 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
So pretty! *hugs her*
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks c:
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K4nK4n Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Aww, so cute.
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Mat-Kearney-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
She is cute.
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:iconcocofoxstudios:
CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconmat-kearney-fan:
Mat-Kearney-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
Cute.
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LinkIsMine Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think her head looks too big for her body, but other then that, I think it is a beautiful piece. -^v^- Keep it up!
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CocoFoxStudios Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's just my style c: thank you
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