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Pretty Please

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Just a pic i decided to draw in my free time, (I should stop and bet back to studying though).
I redesigned my character Diérèse since she was the least favorite of my chars, see if people like her more now.

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First: I'm not that proffessional for responsible critique.

Think you got some trouble with the leg, it looks a bit flat and in my opinion there are some shadows missing. The graphicstyle changes also, the upper legs are very shiny and look very rounded, the lower leg, as mentioned, a bit flat and the toes got an own graphicstyle too.

My suggestion would be, to change the "under - lower leg"s (do not know right word for the thrid part of the leg^^) angle a little bit more anticlockwise so it bends a bit more.

Some Notes, what i'm thinking about: The tail looks like it's startingpoint isn't right in the middle, moved a bit to her left side. And the Tail might be cause a shadow on the leg, also the whole upper leg will set her underleg in shadow.

By side, the background isn't really mine, but think it should only fill the gap.

That might be all, that i can even imagine that would be worth a discussion.